March 6th, 2010, 7:11 am

Chapter 1 - END

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YOU HAVE KILLED MEEEE

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March 6th, 2010, 7:13 am

END OF CHAPTER 1

LAST PAGE.
I hope you can make out the stuff on this page DX it became kinda messy. But um it's Edith's bag, her scarf and her shoe. And her cell phone is that blue thing, and if this were a PNG instead of a JPEG you would be able to see that it says: 13 MISSED CALLS
and that is funny because in THE OLD version you knew that she dies on the 13th :D hrm yeah

and oh the song that is playing is not an old 20s song (I couldn't find a suitable one DX) so I took the song I quoted on the cover page in the old version. Morrissey's "You have killed me"
it's kinda hard to read the lyrics so I'll write it down for you (sorry or the spelling mistake btw, it's Accattone not Accattaone):

"Passolini is me
Accattone you'll be
I enter nothing
and nothing entered me
'Till you came with the key
and you did your best, but...

As I live and breathe
you have killed me
you have killed me
yes, I walk around
somehow
but you have killed me
you have killed me"

it is a really good song and you should listen to it! :D

I am done with the cover page for chapter 2 and the first page, but the cover will be uploaded tomorrow and the first page on monday 8D
for the suspense!

<3

AND GOD THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH. SERIOUSLY. for all your support and love and comments and favs and I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH.

I would've never have made it through the first chapter without you.

this is the FIRST time ever I've come this far with a comic ever.

THANK YOU.

August 21st, 2017, 7:00 am

March 6th, 2010, 7:23 am

REPLIES

@alicerose: FFF YEAH EXCEPT THIS IS A GIRL. hahaha I loved that show btw
I LOVE WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT. I DO LIKE THAT ALL THE TIME HAHAH like stuff happens when I'm writing something and I just have to keep what I wrote because it was so funny. your comment made me laugh so hard <3
I know you were ;);););) you are a cool cat

@chechecheche: haha you think so? D: I'm glad! I'll try to use it more then. but not too much because I like my thin pen too <3
FFHDFGHJSDF THANK YOU. I love you for saying that you think her reaction is realistic <3 .__. I really tried making the dialogue and everything as realistic as possible.
YEAH WHY IS THAT. why does EVERYONE do alice in wonderland remakes in manga format!? :( I really hate it when people do that.
yes it's reall good. with LOADS of wonderful actors<3
hahaha yeah it was ok D not alot of blood though, seeing that it's A COLLABORATION WITH FREAKING DISNEY!? again! :( I like disney butSTAY AWAY FROM ALICE. SERIOUSLY.
thank you<3 :')

USERS

March 10th, 2010, 4:30 am

lol i have no idea why they recreate it, i wouldn't be so angry if it was done in a orginal way, but they all just look the same, but i think tim burton created pone i like, i like the bit when she has to get across the water to get to the castle and she's jumpin on heads xD tht is so tim, but i really like tht he made wonderland look cruel :3
i always thought wonderland was a camouflage tht in reality it wasn't so pretty.

anyw ur really welcome, i really luv ur comic, ur like a proffessional 8D

and i really like this page with the music floading like tht, and all her belongings, u connect things so well, and omg the number 13 xD thts class with the missed calls, seriously i luc ur ideas, i could sit all the day long tryin to analise ur stuff, cuz there's so much to it

October 20th, 2010, 8:12 am

wow man, some serious storytelling talent here

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