February 26th, 2010, 7:54 am

Chapter 1 - page 10

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February 26th, 2010, 7:58 am

OK. I DON'T LIKE THIS PAGE.

A question: Should I use a thicker pen for the pages :X this i 0.1, but I don't know...it might be too thin. What do you think?

The next few pages will look less messy because Edith wont be as groggy.

I hate drawing rooms, btw. Or DESIGNING rooms. And furniture. Wspecially fancy antique furnitures. Can't seem to get it right.

Soon you'll meet the talking cat 8D
and uh yeah chapter one is like over soon xD I think there will me like five, possible six more pages. Maybe seven.
I think this is the shortest chapter, though. Or ierno.
:X

LOL btw
a couple of days ago I LOST a fan O__O it made me realllly sad.
then today I got a new one so yay :D<3

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February 26th, 2010, 9:50 am

kidnapped by liza manelli

here my advice yo

1. use different color for edith and couch so it doesn;t look like an edithcouch covered in strawberry jam.

2. thicker pen, maybe an art pen with flexy nib

3. or, simply don;t color the characters in busy backgrounds..that will emphasize them

4. color everything in maddening pools of black and scrawled pen along with layers of random screentone and asylum art class airbrush..oh wait that's me

February 26th, 2010, 2:29 pm

sorry to sound so forceful, but no, no no no you;re but one of few peopl;e who still use a nice thin pen, this sketchiness is totally a unique thing and part of your style, it absolutely bodes well with the pens =') dont ever change it!! (un;less its natural development)

so right now in feel so sorry for her ='( i dunno i just have a very empty feeling like...urgh how would it feel to have just been murdered but still be alive?

in a zombie story i've never felt such emotions for the character? its a weird feeling but awesome man ;__;

February 26th, 2010, 2:37 pm

i think a thicker pen would be good, it Separate, the foreground and background better.
but of course its entirely up to u, i'm happy with whatever u choose :3

and yay a talking cat !! so exited 8DD
i actually like the way ur backgrounds are draw, last panel is amazing, i wish i could draw fancy furniture :(

i wonder where edith is, its all so mysterious 8D

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